Little Story

Hi everyone!! ๐Ÿ˜€ *waves happily* I have to go do chores soon… *stops waving* But I can post this first! *Smiles happily* ๐Ÿ˜› xD Haha!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ Okay, so I just wrote a story, and thought I’d share it with y’all xD ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s not the best story ever…but it’s got a wee bit of a cliff hanger to it! XD ๐Ÿ˜› here:

โ€œWhen will it end? Are we almost there?โ€ Blake whined to Brittley.

โ€œYouโ€™ll be fine. And … I donโ€™t know.โ€ Brittley muttered, her head still pushed against the pillow in the airplaneโ€™s window. She closed her eyes again as Blake sighed. He didnโ€™t like planes. It wasnโ€™t all that noisy in here, but then again, yes it was.

Blake pursed his lips, trying to think of something to do. He pushed his blond wavy hair out of his eyes and rubbed his nose with two fingers. โ€œUuuuughโ€ฆโ€ he muttered. Why did Britt have to be sleeping!? HOW could she be sleeping?! She just-

Blakeโ€™s thoughts were interrupted by the pilot talking nervously on the radio. Static, and then some incoherent words were going back and forth. Blake perked up as he thought he heard the word โ€˜emergencyโ€™.ย  Then the plane seemed to get quiet. The radio talk was clear now.

โ€œIโ€™ve lost engine one! Engine two is very low on gas! Iโ€™m over land, but I canโ€™t do an emergency landing here! Weโ€™ll try to get over a good landing before Engine twoโ€ฆ.โ€ Blake gasped, not hearing the rest of what was said. What?! Weโ€™re going to CRASH?? Britt was already sitting up and listening, her eyebrows raised with fear and eyes big.

โ€œGod please help us.โ€ Britt repeated over and over. Blake was saying the same thing over and over in his mind. Then everything got quiet. Engine twoโ€ฆhad quit.

The plane ducked up and down, swaying back and forth. Blake looked over at Britt and saw that she was slumped over in her seat. โ€œBritt!!โ€ he called. She had hit her head on the wallโ€ฆand was unconscious. โ€œ no no!โ€ Blake cried. โ€œThis canโ€™t be happening!โ€ He was sweating, and looked out to see that they were VERY close to the ground. He pulled Britt close and hugged her. โ€œweโ€™ll be okayโ€ฆWeโ€™re gonna be okay.โ€ ย He blinked back the tears.

Then everything happened at once. The plane collided with the ground and hit hard. Then it caught on fire as Blake scooped Britt in his arms. His 19 year old sister was older and heavier than him, so it took a lot of effort, but Blake was strong. He walked toward the door of the plane, trying to avoid the fallen planks of wood from the plane ceiling. But right as he neared the door, a large segment of the ceiling fell on him and knocked him to the ground. He knew that he wouldnโ€™t be able to make it out now. But he would try to still save Britt. He wrapped his arms around her and put himself over her. They would probably both die, but he would do his best to see that Britt didnโ€™t. A tear fell from his cheek as he closed his eyes and pulled Britt closer. Then another few boards fell from the ceiling and onto the back of Blakeโ€™s head, knocking him unconscious.


:O :O :O :O :O ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜› What did you think? :/ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜€ XD


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  1. Hey, K. A.! I have something to tell you that I think you’re gonna like… It’s your turn for WordCrafters!!! (It didn’t suit Hayley, so she’s going to write her chapter later. Hmm… it seems like lots of people are busy lately. Last week was super busy for me too!) Are you EXCITED? (Let me guess…)

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    • wh-what!?????????? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! like…n-n-NOW!?????????????? :O :O :O :O AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! HELP! Someone get me a paper baggie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD :O :O :O ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ™‚ AAAA!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ Okay…OKAY! So I just…write now?! XD ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ™‚ WOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAA


        • xD Hehehe!!! ๐Ÿ˜› But I can do it now…right? Cause I am! xD I already have…493 words of it written! xD ๐Ÿ˜› hehe! I hope you’re not disappointed! ๐Ÿ˜› HEHE!!!


        • Is it okay if I like..skip around a bit? Like they’re walking through the woods, then they’re sitting after walking…??? Or do I have to make it how it would EXACTLY happen in real life? Like instead of : They walked through the forest…. they had been walking through the forest for the past two hours….etc.. I would keep writing all that happened in the two hours..? Does that make sense??? I’m not trying to skip very much, believe me!!!


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